tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post7262578758750793709..comments2024-03-17T03:19:46.208-04:00Comments on Color Online: CORA Diversity Roll Call #8: Got Poetry?Color Onlinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15062017327837729986noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-7694730430088372342009-06-20T12:26:29.046-04:002009-06-20T12:26:29.046-04:00I like the rhythm of this American Sentence: &quo...I like the rhythm of this American Sentence: "Beneath blue lights I flood the floor like unstrung beads in a frenzied pour."<br /><br />But the most vivid of the lines for me is this one: "A flock of black boxes flap their wings and tuck their tails for dollars."<br /><br />Great work.Serenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-43417731885747731392009-06-13T20:52:43.746-04:002009-06-13T20:52:43.746-04:00Beneath blue lights I flood the floor like unstrun...Beneath blue lights I flood the floor like unstrung beads in a frenzied pour.<br /><br /> I love the sentence.<br />Sounds like me yesterday:)Thinking Aloudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04892190579167620248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-52306045885500639832009-06-13T10:13:14.841-04:002009-06-13T10:13:14.841-04:00Irene,
I featured this form because it is unique ...Irene,<br /><br />I featured this form because it is unique to America. I am not arguing it defines America.Color Onlinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15062017327837729986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-32889833941950141182009-06-13T08:14:51.348-04:002009-06-13T08:14:51.348-04:00Ah, the American Sentence... I hate to think this ...Ah, the American Sentence... I hate to think this is the form that defines America... will have to think on that. Meanwhile, love what you've done with it, especially the third.Irene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-33241141043910921402009-06-12T22:48:06.084-04:002009-06-12T22:48:06.084-04:00I never heard of this form, either, but love the i...I never heard of this form, either, but love the image you created & the movement/sound of fallen beads...Zetta Elliotthttp://www.zettaelliott.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-49491698679520907982009-06-12T20:49:33.317-04:002009-06-12T20:49:33.317-04:00I love these!! I have never tried this form--have ...I love these!! I have never tried this form--have never read its description until now. Looks like fun. :-) Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-44930314244593093362009-06-12T17:03:23.301-04:002009-06-12T17:03:23.301-04:00I have never attempted the American Sentence eithe...I have never attempted the American Sentence either. Yours provoke much thought! I will have to try to write some at some point!Kelly Polarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10968381456100611120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-38208501897878349282009-06-12T15:15:47.001-04:002009-06-12T15:15:47.001-04:00Thank you, Rhapsody.Thank you, Rhapsody.Color Onlinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15062017327837729986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-199038920161794698.post-55020183411231218412009-06-12T12:34:45.378-04:002009-06-12T12:34:45.378-04:00I tend not to understand much poetry, but your eff...I tend not to understand much poetry, but your efforts at an "American Sentence" sound very beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com